Hi there! You are being reviewed by a newbie!
Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood.I thought the mood was reflective and I was taken in by it.
Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. How could someone meet another person that they perceived to love without knowing who or what that person was? I was completely lost in the story. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.
Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I was hoping she would find him and he be the person of her dreams and he was. I was just floored over the ending. I don’t know if it will continue or if it was the end for them. I felt it was the end, but what reason was it for and how old were they? I wanted to know so much more about it.
Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this. There is something to this story. I find the finding of one’s love interest in such a way to be romantic and I think you could get a book out of this.
Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!
From Billiegail on www.writing.com