I found this short story on Read a Newbie.
I like the opening paragraph, you make it clear without really saying so that Christian is dominated by his mother, probably a little afraid of her.
You also paint us a picture early on of the two friends that leads us to believe they come from a rich background.
I like the story, it held my attention to the end. I felt sorry for the girl who thought because Christian smiled at her in the elevator that he was in love with her. She was obsessed with him and obviously stalking him. Yet he was not aware of any of this. Christian meant everything to this poor girl and he and his rich family didn’t bat an eye when he died.
Things like this unfortunately do happen in real life and I think it is good you have written this story and put it out there.
Very well written.
From riverbedwriter on www.writing.com